Oral litigation; stood before you, saliva drips as lips tease flesh.
Nerves on fire, rubescent mouth caresses flames as
Erotic desires cascade, stirring stimulation.
Sliding languidly tongue laps honeyed cherry; tumescent, as
Unabated pleasures gush, drinking my silent caress, unbidden
Gasps cite a pulsating writhing rush of ecstasy.
As a full blown storm powers through me, intense peaks
Reached. Tempered, your kiss soothes, like the silent hush of snow falling.
Author notes
Acrostic
A contest entry
- Symphony Of Sensuality by Deceits Tears.
1000 points, ended January 3, 2009, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shivering In Delight by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended November 6, 2009, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very sultry and sexy this is!
Whew!
Ultra passionate writing at its' finest; thank you for sharing!
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A very powerful piece of writing here. The imagery is outstanding. This is erotic, yet it is also very sensual too. You skill in this type of writing really comes through Sugar. Well done.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Glad you enjoyed baby
A pleasure to have you read. I must start writing again, give you something new to grab ya 
Darkest Love Chelle xxx
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. Such a great express and so sensual. Congrats on the honorable mention
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed
Appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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I'm not up with all the different types of verse, but I do know what I like, and this is just wonderful, a job so beautifully done
Thankyou and good luck
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Nicely done. I read the poem and enjoyed it thoroughly before realizing it was an acrostic. Very clever. The imagery is great.
Mike
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Thank you for your kind comment, valued and appreciated.
~sugar~
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like the silent hush of snow falling
I may learn to love the snow nearly as much as i love the rain after watching a show as sweet and sensual as this one, Baby! Thanks for sharing - as always - and GOOD LUCK in this contest with this erotic and stimulating piece!
Love & Peace!
Ear.
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I'll teach you to love the snow as much as rain baby After you crown me Queen, in the snowball wars LMAO!
It is always a pleasure to receive and read your comments hon, valued and appreciated always.
Love you Chelle xxx
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Beautiful
Great word choice and imagery with a little metaphor thrown in. This is sensual erotica at its best.
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Aww, thank you hon, for your lovely comment.
Means a lot when I get your thumbs up.
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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my wake up call
Wow, that certainly woke me up this morning normally it take two cups of coffee to give me a kick start lol and may I say what a great write we have here .good luck in the contest x
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Hi YK, glad you enjoyed and it woke you up quicker than your morning coffee,
I appreciate and value your comment
~sugar~
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I so love this hon I enjoyed this read! I wish you luck in the contest
Sliding languidly tongue laps honeyed cherry; tumescent, as
Unabated pleasures gush, drinking my silent caress, unbidden
Gasps cite a pulsating writhing rush of ecstasy.
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Thanks hon, always a pleasure to have you read
I value and appreciate your comments
~sugar~
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WOW! Hon, that first line is an attention grabber, this is amazing writing, I love how it builds in tension and passion, then the wonderful ending of the storm and then the soft soothing kiss as you come down..amazing. This keep your readers attention from beginning to wonderful end, well done sug and keep up the good work.
All the best & good luck
Emma
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Thanks sweetie, pleased you enjoyed this one, you should give it a go.
~sugar~
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