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Quickie

roses are red
apples are sticky
come to my house
I'll give you a quickie

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  • Bruce silver member
    December 26, 2008

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    Very cute! Once again the flow is very smooth You have a great feeling for the sound of the language.


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    December 21, 2008
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    slap!


  • ScreaminMime
    December 21, 2008

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    Roses are red,
    I'm already on your lawn.

    Bribing the judge?
    Good bye to ethics, let's get it on!


  • boeing bettie
    December 21, 2008
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    Great, fun little poem here! Good luck in the contest, I like that you kept it light!!


  • zared
    December 21, 2008
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    roses and apples makes a quickie red enjoyed this


  • Cannonsfire
    December 21, 2008
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    hahahahahaha...omg i bet you get offers now

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