Sitting alone
In my room
The same stuff
I've been doing
For at least a week
Feeling cold and dead
Only I wish I were
Morbid are my thoughts
And I can't stop
I'm too weak
Crying and crying
The flow won't cease
It hurts so much
To even think
Why does it hurt
I can't explain it
Somethings just happened
I can't seem to snap
Out of it
I feel like dirt
Why won't it stop
I've been trying
So hard now
What is this
Theres too much pain
I need help now
Can't you see me
Lying helplessly
On the floor
Myself I can't contain
Please help me
I'm begging you
How can you
Not notice
This suffering
I'm just sitting alone
Still in my room
Its all the same
I've been here
For at least a week
Author notes
I'm hurting right now, and being able to write something and let my emotions out this way helps. A little, but still it helps. Hopefully It'll get better soon.
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strong vulnerable
I like the matter of fact style of the poem...the tone is sombre sad but casual forceful....it has a very strong sentiment without being sentimental..good stuff.
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i can relate to this quite a bit.
"Crying and crying
The flow won't cease
It hurts so much
To even think
Why does it hurt"
this is my favorite stanza.
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