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The Overflow

Missing image

 

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It’s that spot
just left of my spine
that catches sorrow
like a bucket in the rain

It overflows sometimes
and spills into the canyon
on the right

 

 

 

 

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Author notes

Maybe it's the other way around ...

Image: Washed in time by KunslerDGenocide on deviantArt

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  • righteousme
    December 23, 2008

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    my ex-father-out-law has his heart on the right ... the last lines made me think of him ...
    my heart is constantly overflowing ... or leaking ...