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My Cage

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Come into my heated cage


I don't want to be tamed


Feed me your raw meat


Let me wet your bone with my tongue


I will dry nurse you with my hard brown nipples


I want you to stoke my wet cavity


With


Mmmm.... Dr. Hard Dick


Show me how ruthless you really are


While you fuck me like a wild animal


So I can choke you with my thick white cum









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  • Swtpoetryman
    February 3

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    A CREAMY PIECE, BABY - IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE!

    So I can choke you with my thick white cum

    Damn, now that would be a sweet and creamy treat to die for, Miss Hot Chocklat. With your permission I'll make some thick white cum of my own as I've been a little under the weather that last few days and now that I am feeling better I am sure I have an amble supply that would make any cream lover sway and sigh.
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 26, 2008
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    Damn. Raw hot sex. Great job.

    Mike


  • cre8tiv-writer
    December 24, 2008
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    Wow!!! This was sex in writing!!! Definitely one of your best pieces!!!


  • tony yates silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    wonderfully expressive

    nice to see some adult expression, good work


  • geckogirl silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    nicely done....pic fantastic

  • New-n-Improved
    December 23, 2008

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    Caged Minds

    Choke me with your cum,
    as I give you pleasure beyond measure,
    treasure my pole as it enters your paradise,
    of wet passion as I am stuck in your cage,
    feel me as I dig deep with sexual rage,
    your screams are my sensation,
    my moans show my appreciation,
    for your untamed animal instinct,
    for I am lost into your dark void of pink,
    like a wild animal I ravage your body,
    with my tongue,
    as I sip on your brown nipples,
    can you feel the wiggle,
    of my dill pickle,
    Dr. Hard Dick is inthe operating room
    of lust and infatuation,
    caged in your adoration and ready
    for penetration!


    I love this poem and I had to write one to it. Just to let you know how much you inspire me. I hope you like my response to yourpoem because I tried my best to give you the best of me. To my AP Choklat Teddy Bear. From your AP Thugg Nigga.

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • Galaxy2
    December 22, 2008

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    'Your raw meet'!!
    Wow...I love that expression.
    Dr Hard Dick!!!
    Great, bby, great!
    Fuck you like wild animal? I will, cuty! Tell me the venue!

    Kisswes all over, honey!
    Gal


  • Desire gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    OMG~

    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam this can get the dead rising from the grave
    Excellent images to make a man sweat and beg on knees for more~
    Bravo Beautiful!
    Woot! Keep that quill dancing
    I think my eyes burned from the Heat
    -walks into wall-
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • darell
    December 22, 2008

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    Mmmm!

    I would have entitled it, "Savage Animal"
    A dark and beastial peer into the
    human cravings of man/woman.
    This was captivating and provocative.
    What an exotic and erotic cave
    of intrigue and raw passion


  • Dark Otter
    December 22, 2008
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    Hot, hot and more hot!

    But that's the way that I like it!

  • mz.butter
    December 22, 2008
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    you are too much,keep 'em cummin.


  • moluv10
    December 22, 2008
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    HOTT !!!! You always melt my screen with your writes like this. all i can say is CHOKE ME!!!!


  • DogsLookUp
    December 21, 2008

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    Oh yes, yes, YES! *Wipes film of sweat from forehead* Okay, this was probably the sexiest thing I've read in a really long time...you are so glorious at creating poems with wickedly erotic, graphic images that are always hot but never too raw for my taste. Another sensational work of art, my friend.

    ~ Ink XOXOXOXOXO


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 21, 2008

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    with this i think i am just going to faint from lack of blood to my head, lol, keep it flowing my friend.


  • KayJay
    December 21, 2008

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    You are the Queen of erotica I'm not sure anyone can read your words without feeling a twinge of lust or having a passing thought of entering your fantasy. Excellent!
    Ken


  • Ms Lez
    December 21, 2008

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    "Show me how ruthless you really are/ while you fuck me like a wild animal/ so I can choke you with my thick white cum"...I think it's a great erotica. I love your "THICK WHITE CUM". mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!


  • penman gold member
    December 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a great creation. You painted the images so well. Thank you for sharing.


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    your words of raw hard lust stirs the heat of my desire.
    let me into your cage I will show you how ruthless is measured

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    December 21, 2008
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    very fricken hot, love how you got expressive demanding the bone lol love it

  • mcfreeman
    December 21, 2008
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    Such a dark sweet cage....


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    HOOOTTT!!!

    Damn! this is rugged and raw! l.o.l. i'm scared of you and that, that, that cage thingy!1 great hot piece lady!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    you are becomming more more and more of a whore mess i am taking you to the kindom hall and getting satan out of you i can't seem to tame you young lady goodness you getting good with your metephor word usage to i am going to switch my style on yawls asses watch i like this honey upfront fact you excite me


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    Don't hold back. Tell me what you want.. hehe
    mmmmmmmmm You did it again.. You are as sexy as they cum.. I lovet it..


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    Very hot and sensual work here hon!
    Well done and I love what you have done
    with this picture. Great work as always!




    Jeremy0826

  • Rambunctious
    December 21, 2008

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    RAW!!!

    Your write is simply raw with sexual wanting! This would strip any man to the bone and... I am undone!!!
    SensualD.


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    WOW!!! Girl this is so hot, gooood one.

    Wonderful

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