I don't want to be tamed
Feed me your raw meat
Let me wet your bone with my tongue
I will dry nurse you with my hard brown nipples
I want you to stoke my wet cavity
With
Mmmm.... Dr. Hard Dick
Show me how ruthless you really are
While you fuck me like a wild animal
So I can choke you with my thick white cum
Author notes
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture found on yahoo images.
Comments
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A CREAMY PIECE, BABY - IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE!
So I can choke you with my thick white cum
Damn, now that would be a sweet and creamy treat to die for, Miss Hot Chocklat. With your permission I'll make some thick white cum of my own as I've been a little under the weather that last few days and now that I am feeling better I am sure I have an amble supply that would make any cream lover sway and sigh.
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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Damn. Raw hot sex. Great job.
Mike

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Wow!!! This was sex in writing!!! Definitely one of your best pieces!!!


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wonderfully expressive
nice to see some adult expression, good work -
nicely done....pic fantastic


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Caged Minds
Choke me with your cum,
as I give you pleasure beyond measure,
treasure my pole as it enters your paradise,
of wet passion as I am stuck in your cage,
feel me as I dig deep with sexual rage,
your screams are my sensation,
my moans show my appreciation,
for your untamed animal instinct,
for I am lost into your dark void of pink,
like a wild animal I ravage your body,
with my tongue,
as I sip on your brown nipples,
can you feel the wiggle,
of my dill pickle,
Dr. Hard Dick is inthe operating room
of lust and infatuation,
caged in your adoration and ready
for penetration!
I love this poem and I had to write one to it. Just to let you know how much you inspire me. I hope you like my response to yourpoem because I tried my best to give you the best of me. To my AP Choklat Teddy Bear. From your AP Thugg Nigga.
Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

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'Your raw meet'!!
Wow...I love that expression.
Dr Hard Dick!!!
Great, bby, great!
Fuck you like wild animal? I will, cuty! Tell me the venue!
Kisswes all over, honey!
Gal

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OMG~
Holy Mother of Pearl Jam this can get the dead rising from the grave
Excellent images to make a man sweat and beg on knees for more~
Bravo Beautiful!
Woot! Keep that quill dancing
I think my eyes burned from the Heat
-walks into wall-
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~


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Mmmm!
I would have entitled it, "Savage Animal"
A dark and beastial peer into the
human cravings of man/woman.
This was captivating and provocative.
What an exotic and erotic cave
of intrigue and raw passion



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Hot, hot and more hot!
But that's the way that I like it!

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you are too much,keep 'em cummin.


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HOTT !!!! You always melt my screen with your writes like this. all i can say is CHOKE ME!!!!


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Oh yes, yes, YES! *Wipes film of sweat from forehead* Okay, this was probably the sexiest thing I've read in a really long time...you are so glorious at creating poems with wickedly erotic, graphic images that are always hot but never too raw for my taste. Another sensational work of art, my friend.
~ Ink

XOXOXOXOXO


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with this i think i am just going to faint from lack of blood to my head, lol, keep it flowing my friend.
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You are the Queen of erotica
I'm not sure anyone can read your words without feeling a twinge of lust or having a passing thought of entering your fantasy. Excellent!
Ken

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"Show me how ruthless you really are/ while you fuck me like a wild animal/ so I can choke you with my thick white cum"...I think it's a great erotica. I love your "THICK WHITE CUM". mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!


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Excellent
Such a great creation. You painted the images so well. Thank you for sharing.

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your words of raw hard lust stirs the heat of my desire.
let me into your cage I will show you how ruthless is measured


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very fricken hot, love how you got expressive demanding the bone lol love it


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Such a dark sweet cage....


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HOOOTTT!!!
Damn! this is rugged and raw! l.o.l. i'm scared of you and that, that, that cage thingy!1
great hot piece lady!


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you are becomming more more and more of a whore mess i am taking you to the kindom hall and getting satan out of you i can't seem to tame you young lady goodness
you getting good with your metephor word usage to i am going to switch my style on yawls asses watch
i like this honey upfront fact you excite me


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Don't hold back. Tell me what you want.. hehe
mmmmmmmmm You did it again.. You are as sexy as they cum.. I lovet it..

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Very hot and sensual work here hon!
Well done and I love what you have done
with this picture. Great work as always!
Jeremy0826


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RAW!!!
Your write is simply raw with sexual wanting! This would strip any man to the bone and... I am undone!!!
SensualD.

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WOW!!! Girl this is so hot, gooood one.

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