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Heroin

The needles' out
The drugs are too
Holy shit
Were's my spoon
I need a lighter
To warm it up
shoot it in
My Heroin

Will you be there for me?

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  • a gothic romance
    February 13
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    i love it

  • sniper7919
    January 9
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    Good poem ive been on the shit About ten years


  • MindVSLife
    December 28, 2008

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    Very powerful poem. It gives me a feeling of sadness. You should check out my poem called "Deadly Obsession". I wrote about drugs as well. Nice job.


  • Xraided
    December 22, 2008
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    I once wrote a poem and one of my lines were "I bleed out Heroin"...so when I saw this poem I had to click on it. I have because facniated with the world of drugs...it once you have them..everything without them is meaningless, boring...soggy. And painful. This poem is 7 lines, 25 words. Who knew that such a quantity of letters mixed together could hold so much power? Fantastic write.