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Your baby girl

Your baby girl cuts,
when nobodys home,
so no one will know,
that she feels all alone.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause you won't lend an ear,
or a shoulder to cry on,
or a helpiong hand to help heal.

Your baby girl cuts,
when shes "asleep" in her room,
crying to music,
bledding her doom.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause she need the control,
when lifes so un-stable,
when the world runs on its own.

Your baby girl cuts,
each day and each night,
hoping one day,
she might cut the vein just right.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause instead she is dead,
but no body notices,
the broken dreams in her head.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause shes hated by cupid,
left alone so un-loved,
left scard, so she feels it.

Your baby girl cuts,
so she can feel pain,
when shes cold and numb,
from lifes horrible games.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause he said it was over,
then left her to bleed,
while he went and fuck some other girl.

Your baby girl cuts,
when her "parents" lied,
and told her they loved her,
and shut out the light.

Your baby girl cuts,
cause all she can do,
when the world is so mean,
and trammples over you.

Your baby girl..
Your baby girl..
Your baby girl..

Now listen to me,
as i tell you the truth..

Your baby girl is a cutter,
who lays up and bleeds,
cause dee down inside,
the razors all she needs...

-Razors like morphine to the wrist of an addict.

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  • DarkWhispers
    October 17

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    .... whoa

    this is an amazing poem ...
    i can relatew to it alot because i used to cut
    it is really deep and .. all i can say is it'sd amazing
    very good job!

  • this is a beautiful write
    it explains everything to a t.

  • Wow. this is beautiful! great write


  • drcosmic
    January 16

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    Very Impressive

    I have had some experiences with this, and i know it can be a bitter and harsh reality of life today. Some might try to ignore it... shroud it for view... but You have done an impressive job of bringing this to light.
    well done


  • Morphine Mayhem
    January 1
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    ... Thank you


  • doodlelucky13
    December 27, 2008
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    wow

    wow just wow. its perfect, describs it all to a t.


  • SwimForBetterDays.
    December 23, 2008
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    wow this is really strong. so emotional and real great job. =]


  • CinderellaSyndrome
    December 21, 2008
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    I love it.

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