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Red Velvet


Your voice…
Your skin…
Heaven on earth
A soul of red velvet

My heart beats fast
My knees grow weak
You’ve got my heart
Wrapped within your folds

But bitter lies
And treacherous games
Slash your delicate mask
Catching me in the process

And I’m forced
To watch you fall apart
And I’m forced
To feel my heart being destroyed

But you are numb
To what you have created
To all the pain
You are causing me

I’m lost within you
I’m being destroyed within you
And your beautiful but ruined
Red velvet soul

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  • badnovocaine
    December 21, 2008
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    OK I will keep looking to see if you have finished.