I want to rip your heart out
Just like you did to me
I want to watch you crumble
I want to see you bleed
I want your soul to be as empty
As you have made me feel
Like your life has never mattered
And nothing you've seen is real
I want you to be abandoned
Lost, hurting, and alone
With hundreds of people around
But none you've ever known
I want you to feel the emptiness
The gut wrenching pain it brings
And watch the fleeting pleasure
That comes with material things
I want to hear you cry at night
And not know what to do
To know you have no one who cares
And no one to help you through
Author notes
I know this sounds simple, but it's all I can pull out of me without going completely grotesque.
Please tell me what you think
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Right to the point, hoping that the one who has guided you to where you are can feel the measure of their deeds within their life. Nice to see you back.
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moving
The pain ,the sorrow is all so apparent here-each and every line speaks volumes about the hurt felt so deep inside-all emotions glimpsed here are candid and so 'simplythere'-this poem has touched the deepest strings of the heart
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I think its a good poem. My bf well now ex recently broke up with me ..and this seems to reveal my anger side..lol
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