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Haiku'd Kid

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why are my pants wet
did momma spill some water-
clean up on aisle seven

I love lollipops
they taste much better with hair-
why is mom crying

oh look a parade
is this what they call horse doo-
momma it’s squishy

yum tacos for lunch
I think I’ll get more soda-
oops it’s too full now

let’s ride the twister
uh-oh I’m getting dizzy-
burped tacos on shirt

my momma looks tired
I had better take her home-
car keys what car keys

Author notes

Kids are such fun, aren't they? Maybe...picture is of my youngest granddaughter.

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  • ennovy silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    You know how to make me smile and yes they are much fun, and a more then a hand full of Ah's & Oh's... they run me in circles now.....what so cool I could ID with each metaphoric scene you created...Love the photo you took of Deja she such a doll she can't be much trouble.....Merry Merry Christamas now the Grands want you in that Santa suit.....you sure they aren't elves? LOL
    excellent write .........Novynovy