Dear Boy,
I don't know who you are and
I don't know who you'll be
The one I'll spend forever with
This letter is for thee
I hope you'll ask me out
And that at first sight I know for sure
And that you'll hold my hand
There's nothing I'd want more
I admit I'm shy to kiss you
But don't be afraid to kiss me
Your kisses will be perfect
This I think, oh so secretly
I know you'll be so handsome
With eyes that make me melt
And each and every word you speak
Will always be heartfelt
When your arms are around me
My life will be complete
My heart will take a fall for higher
When our passions meet
Please never forget my birthday
and my favorite color depends on my mood
Do forgive if, i don't mean it, when I'm angry
That I scream and be so rude
Know that my lucky number is 17
And oh how I love to sing
And baking, making jewelry
Oh how I love drawing
Don't forget I hate mint chocolate chip
Remember I really really love sushi
I'll always sleep in a T-shirt of yours
Your essence intoxicates me
Don't ever hide your feelings
Tell me what you're heart says
I want to comfort you
I'll never judge you, always
And I will tell you mine
Keeping secrets isn't what I do
Promise to hold me tight If I'm in tears
Even if you haven't a clue
Remember I like walks in the park
And getting wet in the rain
Kiss me as it pours down
I know it kind of sounds inane
I won't admit I like to be tickled
But go ahead to tickle me all you want
I'm sure to blush and giggle loads
When you tease me and taunt
And when all the fun settles down
We're sitting by the fireplace all cozy
I'm telling you I love to snuggle
I hope you cuddle me please
Hopefully conflict's won't arise
And separation won't take place
And your word of forever won't be broken
My heart would hurt in every place
I hope I hope with all my soul
That I'll meet you real soon
My heart it hopes a lot it does
I'm still waiting each afternoon
So 'til then, I hope time passes by
As I continue to wait
They say time might take so long
But you'll be sure to appreciate
I'll know it's true when we speak
Those three words, it'll feel so right
Oh how they prance and dance upon my lips
Each and every day and all night
That day will come my heart tells me
And I know my heart to be true
So when it does just know that
This letter is for you
With Much Love,
Silky
What do you thinketh?
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Awwwww !
Beautiful and heartfelt
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good letter
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Amazing
I would be so happy if i recieved a letter like this! I wish all girls would write poetry
I agree with cocoknight, the ryhthm is sometimes slightly off but you could go through it and just change a few syllables if you really want to be a perfectionist.
Good work!
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A letter, any would be honored to receive! Keep your faith in Love alive, and one day this letter will be given, and being truly blessed, you'll get one like it too! The rhythm is off at times, but doesn't affect the overall quality too much!
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That's so cute hun =) I adore it
I love the vocabulary, some of the rhythm could perhaps use a bit of work. But don't get me wrong either it's an endearing piece. You're so amazing, your imagery is so clever and adorable! I totally wish the letter was for me
Much luv,
PS
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Wow how beatiful, I hear the love doves cooooooooing for you. This is beautifully writen. I loved this write Its so beautiful I can't say enough for it. It was a pleasure to read.
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wow
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!
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Awes
This was so cute!!
all the wishing and wanting will come true one day love. <3
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thanks
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This is a great job, its easy to relate to and also very sweet
VERY GOOD
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*rasies hand* OH OH OH is this poem for me?
awww silky you shouldn't have hahahahaha kidding.
Its a really sweet poem, I think you did a great job.
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No worries JT it's never gonna be for you and it isn't for you lmao
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awww now u made me sad
lol kidding
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uh-huh
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silky oh em gee this is wonderful. i simply adore it.
~Oka
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Wow, its a fantastic poem, you really do out do yourself
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pretty this poem really got my heart and it reminds me of the way I want my Nick to love me
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awethanks
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amazing, its written so perfect
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thanks Paul.
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Wow! I really like this, its... amazing! Easy to relate to, and explains so much. all i can say is W.O.W! Great job
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Thank You!
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Um... You really are not supposed to be this good you know...
I'm the only one that is the best!
Because I am a man!!!
And I can!!!
Just kidding dear!
I see that this poem lets me know you are smarter then you look...
And since you are cuteness...
Your little poetry fits you well!
Nicely done dear little princess.
It was a pleasure to read!
^ A lick on the tip of your nosey!
- MY NOSYE! -
(I just hope the letter is for me!)
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love*
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nicely done dear sis amazingly penned!
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Muchas Gracias hermanita
Te Amo Mucho mucho mucho!
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Oh, so very sweet. I hope you meet this guy.
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Thanks
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