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Sesitive heart

I am the world
world is me
my thoughts made it.

when I hurt someone
I am hurting my self
I became withdrawn
lest I hurt someone.

someone is wrong
I can't condemn without hurting.
hurting others is hurting myself.
I withdraw to seclusion
where I live with my self
without sitting in judgement.

running away is a guilty act
evading duty,
my heart rebels,
yet I can't correct world
I am troubled with society

equally conscious without it.

life is linked
a relationship with many
I hurt,
getting hurt,
within many morals of society.

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A contest entry
Running Away

prompt: write anything inspired by the song
Running Away by Hoobastank

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  • Poesing
    December 21, 2008

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    I agree with your thoughts about hurting others is only hurting ourselves. Nice write! Thanks for adding me to your favorites list. God bless.

  • meena krish
    December 20, 2008

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    hmmm..some thoughts that are playing in your mind is written with emotional touches. Its hard to accept the wrongs that takes place and
    sometimes we can't do anything about it. Your poem has a voice..liked it Good luck in the contest.