The lights are on,
The room is dark,
And I can see your eyes fill up with water.
Oh, nothing makes you smile,
And nothing helps,
Although it really ought to.
Maybe its just me,
Maybe I'm too dumb to see,
That nothing grows where no river flows,
And its easy to throw good love away.
In my dreams I hold you close,
I feel your breath so warm against my face.
With your arms around me,
Squeezing tight,
Theres nothing like this,
I feel so safe.
Maybe I'm just blind,
But I cant seem to make up my mind,
For when you go, I feel so low,
But its easy to leave it behind.
A contest entry
- My love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Only by wingsofgold25.
700 points, ended January 28, 75 entries
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Comments
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oh i hope your not really feeling this way. i know how hard it is. i thought it was very good. i love the creativness in it. Very well done!=)
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A very well written piece.
Thank you for your entry.
Good Luck in the contest. -
I love the flow and the sentiments shown here in this beautiful journey of your thoughts..wonderful indeed..and thanks for the entry..
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