I wake up in the morning and then recall –
I lost you.
It’s so nice, my bed is empty!
I’m tired of you my dear lady and
Finally alone.
I don’t have to tell - "I love you"
Oh god,
I don’t love you anymore.
Author notes
Parody on:
Richard Brautigan - Love Poem
It's so nice
to wake up in the morning
all alone
and not have to tell somebody
you love them
when you don't love them
any more.
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What did you think
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Very humorous and pointed at once. A real pleasure to read.
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this is very nice
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Excellente
I like it! It's nice to not have to keep saying i love you to a person you really don't love anymore. Good write. You're in the finalist group in my contest now! yay! Great job!
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Thanks for the Bronze trophy!
I'm glad you liked it.
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good write exacting its ask i thought it was clever in a short space
well done
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Thank you dear!
I have couple more parodies if you like to check it out.
You can read some of more serious poems too!
Come back again for reading more.
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good write.
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Thanks.
You're invited to read another work
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This has a cutting truth to it.
But it's sincere in the way he tells his lover they're no more in yours, versus the way Brautigan says it in a sort of conversational tone.
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Thank you for entering my contest. I like the satircal change to the Richard Brautigan poem. He is one of my favorites.
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Oh I'm grinning, this was cute. Very simple, and humorous. I guess it is quite refreshing to see love from this view point.
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Lol... This gave me a good chuckle. Thanks for you entry
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