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Must Be Dreaming

Can it be possible, to live in one's dreams?
That's what I'm doing, at times it rather seems.
So sweet, so perfect.... Too good to be true.
But, oh... Don't wake me, whatever you do.

Perpetuity sworn, and signed with your kiss.
Impossibly right, it's too much to miss.
These rules makde to break, or at least to bend.
Take all we can, while we can... Fighting the end.

I feel the want, the need. THe burn, the ache...
They all surge back, the moment I wake.
"I love you"... empty words in the dark, feel so wrong.
And before my eyes pry open, I already know you're gone.

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  • emLeejo
    December 21, 2008
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    Sir.. I do believe i absolutely love this piece.. It's literally rather amazing to me.. I mean, like.. I know what you're talking about in it.. weirdly enough.. and it's always so much easier to live in a dream, the perfectness of it all, rather than wake to the reality that fails us.. i mean.. idk, but I loved this piece.. it was very good! <3 much love bud.