They die for the ultimate rush
Both dealers and addicts alike
Getting high on a veiled crush
Going down on the first strike
And then up beyond any limit
To a superior strange summit
Unreachable for mortal souls
Who hunger for distant goals
Knowing naught of being free
Or overlaid hints of kundalini
By meditation or by alchemy
To become one with eternity
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Rhyming prewrites :] by Ami.
550 points, ended August 24, 77 entries
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Wow deep write the rhyming was perfect strong message also
Thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck
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"Both victims and addicts alike" are trapped in this terrible illusion that fear and death are necessary to find the heights. What is possible with drugs is also possible without them, though it may take longer - the disease of the age is wanting it now.
Once again you have written a poem of strong imagery which brings an occult problem into light and sharp focus.
Best wishes always and especially in this season of Peace.
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Surely here there is a lot to ponder
I see many truths in this write, becoming one with Divinity is to see the light and feel it`s warmth
Blessings dear poet
Best wishes on this festive time of Year
Nick
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masterful and deep.
Unreachable for mortal souls - Who hunger for enured goals.
Reading you forces me to new hieghts. Thank you for writing...masterful and deep.
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I like how you take a topic, and reveal it through your words to paint a portrait so all can understand and view clearly. Thanks for sharing, and keep up the wonders of you.
Peace
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what can I say Light? I wish you and yours a beautiful holiday.
Pray for me Messenger.
Love Judy
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To be in harmony ...
soul with body, and mind in a deeply spiritual way, is a gift. We understand not the ways of God's Divine Plan. This poem of yours inspired me to write for all those suffering, often beyond our knowing ... I shall send you the link as soon as it is done.
Joyous time for you and yours, Friend.
Christmas Blessings.
Myra
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So True!
Ah, my darling Chris, this is not only expertly crafted, perfectly rhymed with awesome flow, it also delivers a detailed sad truth about drug and/or alcohol addiction. You even provide the users with a way out, our divine Father and His Christ. Instead of turning to their bottles and/or lines, I so wish they would turn to the only answer to all their woes.
Well done, master of the pen! If this were in a contest, it surely would garner the gold: as it should.
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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Beautiful. I have long thought that all the pain of this earth is the result of our missing or not understanding what divinity really is. We search for something that we already have, we just have to open ourselves to it.
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dmt is naturally produced by human body
but neutralised fast by monoamine oxidase
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This couldn't have come at a better time
I was falling, fast... becoming dissalusioned with all. Now i have a greater understanding of what i have been going through for the last fifteen or so years... what has been driving me. also i have found affirmations in the information you've provided aswell as information i have discovered. I took an intrest in Hatha yoga at about the age of twenty aswell as meditation... have been on a path of self discovery since.
The transition from one set state to another can be overwhelming... i think i have been overwhelmed.
Yes, an anciant practice which is occuring more in people nowadays without even practice.
Thank-you for sharing your insightfull self with us
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