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"Ill be home soon darling I love you"
Is what she heard last
Her gut feelins told her he has dead
"My life is like a movie,
I see it now,
And when I look back its gone,
It falls thought my fingers,
Making it hard for me to hold on to,


When I go to sleep I see your heart and your soul,
Now I don't see that,
You left not sayin a word,
You left with wind that sweep you away,


Now your shadow wlks with me,
Still your not the real you,
You keep me safe,
The only thing your gone,
The man I love is not here,
I have no body to hold on to,
No salty lips to kiss,


I wish I had you here I love you

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  • bunchnbunch
    February 20
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    bunchnbunch

    totally feel that way about someone, except he's not in the war.totally good write.

  • Jannah
    December 20, 2008

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    WOOOW THANK YOU FOR POSTING THIS...i love it...its how i feel...loving someone that isnt here really