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Crush

You've got me electrified
and on a wire
hanging above the city
and not caring about anything
so complicated, frustrating
can't get my head on straight
i look both ways/think about everything
spinning round faster and faster

its a roller coaster
heart above in my throat
can't get it off my mind
i fell so hard*
your not at fault
it shoul've been
could've been an accident
but it wasn't
it didn't hurt, i didn't cry
i just couldn't explain
my voice was gone
you're all i had in mind
everything i needed
was everything i didn't need
i fell so hard for you
off that roller coaster
it aint just a crush
no, i think i fell in love

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*help from maridza flores

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  • Dreamsofgold
    December 20, 2008
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    I loved this.Amazing.Excellant use of words.Keep writing,Best wishes,Dream.