I see the moon in full sight
Taking my breath with all it’s light
It calls to me from day or night
It calls to me stealing all fright
From crescent to full
There is none that resist its pull
It shimmers and shines at waters edge
It dances with me, and not just in my head
We travel in circles ever so tight
I see the moon in full sight
A contest entry
- The Moon by Dragonbabyx3.
1000 points, ended December 23, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
This is beautiful, The Rhyme is perfect, I think you have a typo the last line though, I think instead of "is" you meant "in". Other than that, beautiful work! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!
-
-
Thank you for your comment. Sorry about the ending LOL Funny thing is that I had a proofreader (ok, it was my dear hubby lol) take a look at it, and he had missed it. I enjoyed writing for your contest, thank you.
-
Adding your comment:
