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A Cat's Life

 

Many years have quickly passed on by
since i was born naked into this world
tucked deep in soft belly fur I curled
when the evening sun would leave the sky

Many years it took for me to learn
that my place on this earth was planned
and my job to catch furry mice was grand
and for their lives show no concern

Many years have I taken a place of pride
stealing the very best spot to sleep
and there I huddle down and peep
eyes barely moving but open wide

Many years a friend to man and son
a companion to each one in turn
and from these times I quickly learn
a friendship that could not be undone

Many years I've climbed that Xmas tree
filled with pretty baubles, bells and lights
and when reaching to those dizzy heights
they would come chasing after me.

Many years that twittering bird has sung
from its golden cage high on the stand
but feathers within my paws were planned
and his squawking taste upon my tongue

Many years I've teased that crazy hound
and made his canine life hell, with glee
as I escaped to the old oak tree
while he stayed down there on the ground

Many years have passed and life takes toll
his creaking bones and health give way
but nine lives I have and I will stay
the family around me to console.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This was inspired by Johathon Robins poem 'A Dog's Life'
I wanted to tell the other side of the story from a cat's POV..

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  • Kari gold member
    March 29

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    Lol, this was really cute and funny.

    I love cats myself

    I am glad that you wrote about the cat's side of the story.

    It needed to be told!!

     

     


  • LittleAnn
    December 29, 2008

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    I was reading JR's "A Dog's Life" once again, and in the comments someone mentioned your poem "A Cat's Life"...

    First of all, I have to say that I totally fell in love with the picture on top. So cute!

    About the poem itself...
    When reading it for the first time, I found it hard to "get" the rhythm of this, because I was expecting this to read like JR's poem...

    I like the use of the abba rhyming in this... The rhymes do not sound forced to me, but rather natural.

    When I read this the second time, without thinking of iambic hexameter and stuff like that (lol), the poem flowed really smoothly. I suppose I just wasn't able to read the poem the way it was meant to the first time...

    I like the content of this very much. It was a humorous and sweet description of a cat's life, I especially liked the last stanza, that was really cute!

    The reference to the dog ("his creaking bones and health give way") made me grin quite a bit...

    All in all, I enjoyed reading this poem very much. It is a great addition to JR's poem...

    Well done!
    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • McRae by nature
    December 24, 2008
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    Clever


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 24, 2008

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    Well this certainly a perfect summary of a cat's life Gosh they get it good, especially in my house and by the sounds of it, in yours
    Love the imagery and the snippets of the cat's thoughts!
    Great rhyme scheme too.
    I loved reading this Ann. Thanks for sharing.
    Gaylene


  • ea silver member
    December 21, 2008
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    well, this isn't nearly as long as "A Dog's Life" - it's enjoyable and I hope it has at least nine.


    • AnnD Moderators member
      December 21, 2008
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      Thankyou for visiting ea, no you are right. I believe it is one stanza shorter in length.... not that I was counting.
      I appreciate your comment.
      Wishing you a happy xmas time.

      AnnD


  • David J Martin gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    Haha, very good. I wonder what Mr. Robin would think? I would think that he would be very pleased that you imitated his style so well, in this entertaining tale, yet made it funny at the same time. I enjoyed reading this. Nicely done. x

    • AnnD Moderators member
      December 21, 2008
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      Thankyou for visiting and for your kind words.
      I sincerely would hope that JR would be flattered by my attempts here.... I have to say, it was not overly easy to write and keep to the form, but I was relatively pleased with the outcome.

      Thank you again

      AnnD


  • suseann
    December 21, 2008

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    Yet each would miss the company of the other so..familar. Cute piece from the cat's nature of beholding life.


  • CandiKisses
    December 21, 2008
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    sorry...i forgot the applause!!

  • CandiKisses
    December 21, 2008

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    And a wonderful job you did!! Having had 5 cats of my own in my lifetime, this pretty much says it all!! This is very well written and flows really well. It's beautiful....keep writing!


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    December 21, 2008
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    LOL....this is great...I love it! Nice work!

  • Xx-Erin-Solakian-xX
    December 20, 2008

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    Great write! I loved it. I have four cats (three are kittens).

    "Many years I've climbed that Xmas tree
    filled with pretty baubles, bells and lights
    and when reaching to those dizzy heights
    they would come chasing after me."

    We took our Christmas tree down and set it up (undecorated) in the living room so the three kittens could get used to it being around. Their idea of getting used to it was climbing it. After we got it decorated they've still tried to climb it and fortunately it hasn't worked.

    I like the pictures that you used as well.

    Keeping writting.


  • rinzurajan
    December 20, 2008
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    really cute...

    did u read it to ur catty baby???




  • lisapoet
    December 20, 2008

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    Really light and cute. Well done. Loved the flow and you captured the personality of the cat. You had some nice imagry and great cues. I will read more. THanks!


  • wolf
    December 20, 2008
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    Yay go mom. ^.^ but I still dont like Cats will you get me a puppy?


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    As a cat lover, I have to say, this is quite a wonderful description of "The Cat"! Could be any cat, mine or yours -- because they all seem to think like this. Very well done, with excellent form and meter.


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Although I have a major preference towards dogs. (seeing as I own a wolf hybrid) But I really can appreciate the poem although the cat in the pic does look pretty cute. I really like the rhyme structure as it is one I have serious trouble pulling off myself. You did a great job Foxy Lady


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 20, 2008

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    Nice job with this poem. Personally, I prefer dogs and am deathly allergic to cats, but you have done very well with this. Congratulations.

    Mike


  • catz Moderators member
    December 20, 2008

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    This is wonderful, Ann !! As a fellow cat lover, you know I can appreciate a poem like this. So much of it reminds me of my old cats Boss and Chow. Each line brought back another special memory... I miss them.

    It seems like cats are either loved or despised, I guess. But how can anyone resist their playful nature, their idiocyncraties, their self-centerdness mellowed by their irristable furry coziness, their... well you know what I mean

    I love this poem, Sis

    Ummm... in the 2nd line of the last stanza you refer to 'his' creaking bones... do you mean that to be 'my' creaking bones?


    Dee


  • Mariana gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    I adore cats and I can tell you love them too. You have written about the wonders of everyday life when you have a cat as a pet

    Mariana


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Well penned !

    I really enjoyed your poem. You have described the life of a cat perfectly Well done

  • Cat gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    happy belated!



    this is very sweet!

    Mary

  • The Rainbows Mind
    December 20, 2008

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    Jonathan Robin... Great poet.
    This poem is very cute and playful while at the same time very decscriptive and analytical.
    My only recommended edit would be buy as opposed to bye. Other than that, you've got yourself a great poem. It's a very heartwarming poem for the holidays.


  • symitar Moderators member
    December 20, 2008

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    I know what a cat lover you are, Ann, and this just suits you to a tee. Those furry, purring critters couldn't have a better home than with you! Like your work as always!

    becky


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    December 20, 2008

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    Ha ha ROLFLMAO
    This was interesting , pussy tails never cease to amuse

    Cyber Artist

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