Love stumbles out from thickets of intensities
bubbling forth like gushing rivers of water
being denied does not its flame extinguish.
From whence cometh such a love as this?
it comes from the fiery depths of compassion
sullied not ever by the dissenting voices.
Silenced, maybe, but not to its undoing
only the sharpest eye to the future;
ruptures disqualify the weak of heart.
Still silky sweet, love is its own reward
sojourning within realms of delightfulness
variety of endowments color its roots.
What can love not handle, there's no handicaps
what force threatens its indomitable spirit?
love springs into active mode when repressed.
Doubling like wind drifts of snow unbound
torrents can't shatter its solid veneer
it laughs at the mention of dire defeat.
Rebounding lies at its capable core
hurling confusion's packaged briefs
into the outer domains of fragility.
Author notes
"The kindest love is still bleeding from the last shot."
I chose this one because I believe in the strength of love, I rally behind it's potential to conquer all foes.
In a list
A contest entry
- Wake up your eyes, and darling your smile... by raw love.
1800 points, ended January 4, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me hope by Tiffany Turner.
440 points, ended January 13, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So much truth here, this poem give strength to those that can read and understand
David
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Wow !
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Bravo !!
A truly marvelous poem ! Very elegant !!
And congratulations on your silver !
Best wishes ! Friend Easy
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Thank you so much for your vote of confidence-I appreciate for sure
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Bravo !!
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great write...love the whole flow of it...keep up the good write
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Thank you so much for your comments and for the Silver; lots of love..
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Now that's rising above. The strength of love portrayed in
style. Loved this piece! Gold well deserved. Bravo!
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Thank youlol
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Thanks for entering!
This is beautiful, bright, a delight to read, and so true.
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Thank you for these comments coming from you, I appreciate lots of love.
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