i heard your voice once in my mind
and i listened how you pronounced the sounds
i also remember how good you smelled
and how when i was 3 you gave me a silver bell
but now you are gone and those memories have
faded into the back of my head
i see your face everyday in my mind
in the room
and all i think is why did i have to know you
i cant stand you words. they make me hurt
i cant stand the way you always flirt with
them
it hurts to not hear you voice anymore
and it hurts to see you everyday
why did god do this to me?
why did he take the love away
and replace it with hate?
Author notes
4- What hurts us the most is the silence of those we love and the words of those we despise...
ok ummm i entered and i hope you like it, i did it for Hikari Lady's contest uhhh....so here it is
A contest entry
- 10 quotes to inspire you contest by Hikari Lady.
700 points, ended December 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
plz tell me wat u think
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This was so touching. I loved your last stanza and how you've placed your emotions in every line and shown your thoughts on the prompt.
This was so sad and great write. Thanks for entering.
Best of luck.
Much love
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thank you, writing this had released a lot of emotion. as i was writing i started to tear up because i was thinking about someone who had just passed. but thank you so much!!
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WONDERFULLY EXPRESSED!!!!
Oh my! Sadly it is so true that sometimes our happiness is taken away and replace with sorrow and pain
We though need to try to find with open hearts and minds that special feeling again.'s Stay strong and true to your heart and they will come back.'s
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thank you
thank you o so much 4 that....i am so happy that people like mi poems with me being so young....thank you
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