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Empty Streets

Down the empty streets
I hear a voice from a house
Raaaaah! Out comes a ghost!

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I tried a dark haiku.

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    October 12

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    This is just too cute to be missed, you did really well with this.
    You keep writing like this and we'll all be reading your own book soon. Well done.


  • Andiness
    December 20, 2008
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    this justdoesnt seem serious enough for a haiku...even if it is funny


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Aww, Beth, this is gorgeous...

    Love this...
    You're a great little poet...
    Spooky, fun & an underlying darkness that was delightful...
    Well done!!!


  • EmeraldDreams
    December 20, 2008

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    Awww, Beth, you are so clever!
    I love this one, it makes me wonder what the ghost looked like, and what happened next.........

    Great job my sweetheart!