All of my life I've waited
for this special time to come
when all others would be left waiting
only I could be the savior of that one day
the dark pool waited for me
I knew what I had to do
slowly I did advance
jumping in, splash
I made it
clear to the center
the pool of darkness steams
the vapors start to melt me away
slowly I spread across the top of it
my life force blending into it
all said it's the best thing
I could ever do
What better way to go
then to put a smile
on your face
I look
across the way
my brother has done the same
A contest entry
- Hot Chocolate and Marshmallows by CarolDesjarlais.
700 points, ended December 29, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Ah, far edge indeed....from the perception of the marshmello...unique and ty for entering.



