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Zack the Christmas Zebra !

                                  Zack the Christmas Zebra


W. Peter Sanci Dec. 21 / 2008

I’d  like to dedicate this little poem to my mom up in heaven. Mom I still love you and miss you every day of my life.


It was the week before Christmas and as usual Santa’s Workshop, and so was, for that matter the whole North Pole.
The countdown was on only 7 days left till  Christmas Eve, “ The Big Night ! ” as Santa and the Elves used to say, as
Santa made  one of his evening strolls.
“ My gosh, but we have an awful lot of
good little boys and girls on my list this year don’t we Zack ? ”

Pg 2

Santa was speaking to Zack, his newly acquired Zebra, a f substitute Reindeer in case one of the regulars got ill on Christmas Eve. “ I don’t think I’d be able to fly the old sleigh with only 7 reindeer, ” he confided to Zack, who nodded back.
“ Well now Zack, ” Santa went on to say, “ Can you name me all of my regular riendeer’s names ? ”
“ Why of course, Santa. ” Zack repled confidently.
“ There’s Vixen, Blitzen, and Dancer, and Prancer, Comet and Cupid, and also Dollar. ”
“ Very good ! ” said Santa, “ but aren’t you forgetting some one very special. ”
“ No way Santa, ” continued Zack, ”

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“ He’s the most famous reindeer of them all, Rudolfh, the Red Nose Reindeer. ”
Well old Santa sighed a deep sigh of relief.
“ Zack, you passed ! You are now my main substitute Zebra / Reindeer. ”
A giant cheer went up all over the North Pole !
The End





Author notes

I got the idea for thsi poem from a simple picture of aa zebra I drew I ope yo all like my poem.

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  • dragonscales
    December 20, 2008

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    haha that is a little funny i like it and it has a happy ending to. not much detail in it but it was entertaining. good luck in the contest

    • Pietro456
      December 29, 2008
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      Dragon scales !

      Thanks so much for your'e kind words about my poem. I appreciate them so very much. Thanks again.

    • Pietro456
      December 20, 2008
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      dragonscales !

      Why thanks I think for you're somewhat sacrastic remarks. I appreciate them so very much.

  • Pietro456
    December 20, 2008
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    Great of Course !