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Missing A Part of Me

removed
but not forgotten
hole where it once was
covered now with new hair
no one even knows but me
maybe invisible to their eyes
yet that "c" word scares all who know
the mental pain inflicted by this disease

Author notes

Had a skin cancer removed a few months ago on my scalp. Doctor said he got it all. Do not need any more surgery.

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 25

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    Cancer is such an impersonal predator that strikes all indiscriminately but thank goodness it can be thwarted and treated many times. I am thankful you have had good results and hope you continue to do so my friend. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem.

    Brother Dennis


  • stavykm gold member
    February 8

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    Oh Wow

    I'm in awe at your strength to share your personal pain. I'm so glad to hear that the doctor got it all. I personally am afraid of getting skin cancer from being in the sun so much as a kid. I'm glad you got your new hair back and it all must have been so scary. Again I'm so glad you are alright.

    Excellent poem written with personal brilliance and a humble, loving spirit.

    Wishing You Many Blessings,
    Much Love Always,
    Kelle Marie


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    January 10

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    Wow. :: huggles :: I am so glad you pulled through. You're such a beautiful ray of light in this world. :: huggles ::
    Beautiful poem.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • ShAwNaLeE
    January 1

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    this is a good little poem...good job...and keep it up!

    ps. im glad that everything is okay...good luck...

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 27, 2008
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    Thank goodness he has gotten it all!!


  • Malabu
    December 23, 2008
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    lol i commented on a clone of this poem just copy and paste it here hun

    mal


  • nobodys-girl
    December 20, 2008

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    i'm so glad that everything worked out ok. my cousin just had brain surgery and this poem really made me think of her. awesome job.

  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    December 20, 2008
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    Thoughtful poem about personal loss and facing medical uncertainty, it is a harrowing time. I'm glad you have gotten through this proceedure and I appreciate your sharing. Write on my friend.

    Brother Dennis

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