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feeling no more for the one never known

yet they crumble so easy
a world apart
they found their love
in the voices
they only heard

your so crazy!
it only makes sense to me
i'm  so crazy!
a ring pop for a bride to be

together in their hearts
forever
their souls were meant for eachother
seperated by their hearts
however
for the sake of  their love of the other

love for an animal cracker
you've never tasted
the monkey and the zebra
they will not get wasted

their heads both spin
in the same direction
delicious and deadly
without sinsation

searching for love
they found in each other
a cookie one minute
a lunitic the other

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