hush hush be silent
don't shed a tear
no one's there to listen
no one there to hear
the tiny drops of water
that cool your scorching face
are minuscule deminities
of happiness and grace
why cry ?
no ones lending,
an ear to your infant cries
in single file
like criminals
you trip to your demise
hush hush there's sunlight
someone's peering in
to see the harsh reminder
of the child that's written in
Author notes
as a writer i take insparation form anywhere possible but this unspeakable torchure and hardship made me feel guilty for being here it made me think about all those people who lost their life due to societies blindness this is for people to read and think that this should never have happend.
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AH MAN!
You make some of the stuff I write look like dirt n ur younger than me! Man that is just a nice poem great job n hope to see one of these poems at a book store!
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this is amazing
your sensitivity and warmth shine here little fish,,, i think i read you are 15 years old????? could this be true???? if so, your wisdom far out-does your years,,, i'm thinking it must be a TYPING error,,,really??? 15 years old???? thanks for sharing your wisdom
MICHAEL
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thankyou
thankyou soooo much you are soooo kind you really are yes i was 15 but now as of the 23rd of march i am 16 lol thankyou for your kind kind words im sure your wisdom is yet greater than mine
lol x
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this is so good and really makes me thing. it was so wrong for anyone ever to be treated like that and the fact that some people still claim it never happened just makes me so angry.
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you have touched on a subject that many a person will or should stop and take a thought on, this is a cruel, cruel peice of history that should never ever be forgot.
your poem shows respect and empathy for the lives lost to this cruel crime, very well done.
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well hang on a mo babe, what can i say, actually im all choked up, this is amazingly beautiful,sensetive and empathetic, i'm proud to be your mum, you show incredible insight and outstanding ability, love n hugs
mummyxx
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