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The Man, the Wall




Here was a futile space
  where plants grew, and died;
where I strove, and failed;
where the word spoke, and was choked silent
  and I couldn’t read my name
as you wrote it among the stars
  to show the way to batter through
  the struggles I would hold.

So I shall try, and try
    until the end comes of all my hopes
and am allowed to lay down my life.





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Oh, the futility of life, as we struggle to reach up and beyond where we are, only to fall back time and time again! Someday though, someday we shall fall past and through the failure into something far, far more mighty.

-thefallout
www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read

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