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The gift that keeps giving

The gift that keeps giving, it's special
Hopefully it's given freely and often
Especially at this time of year, it's needed

Grasp onto the reality of this gift now
It's one that has a lot of beauty daily
For in a world, of coldness, it's needed
That once it's received, it's contagious

The gift, it's love, but how is it given?
Hopefully when it's said & done remember
A gift of love, comes from the heart
That generates more than emotions

Kindness is a by-product...misunderstood
Especially when it's taken for weakness
Everyday if love was given, you'd see
Probably a better world, and people
So baton down the hatches, and join me

Give of yourself, especially during these times
It's now, that during the holidays it's important
Via the path we travel, look at everyone move
It's those that need this gift, the gift of love
Now, even if they fall, pick them up with compassion
Growing even stronger, the gift that keeps giving...impacts!

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  • isabellacohen
    December 25, 2008
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    i like the idea

    I like the idea of your poem,

    thanks for entering,
    best wishes,
    Isabella


  • 2lullabyhaven
    December 23, 2008
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    I totally agree, forthwith...people need this gift above all


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    A wonderful plea for love and kindness -- how it could change the world! A very good read!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Oh yes, friend...just what is on my heart too...A chilly very cold winter and Christmas for many...This is the time to fuel the embers of compassion and love and put it to work from our hearts, and you know what..It will be a more meaningful Christmas, and every day of the year...Wonderful write...God bless you!


  • drifter
    December 20, 2008

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    "Now, even if they fall, pick them up with compassion
    Growing even stronger, the gift that keeps giving...impacts!"

    -this means a lot to me. there are times when you get reminded that when you fall, it's not the end. if its not right, its not the end, because in the end, everything will be allright

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