tranquility, shattered by
malevolent timbre of thunder
as it rolls across the sky
incandescent visions
burn and crackle
within my view
passion stains self immolation
as desire flares and
we are consumed
Author notes
He'll understand...
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday!!!! (~markgrif~) by PerfectImperfection.
1350 points, ended January 7, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I may not know of the 'in betweens' to this, but the piece itself is quite beautiful. Nice imagery throughout, powerfully penned. Thank you for your entry!
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Wow.. what a fantastic write. Love the vocab in this hun
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Beautifully done Margaret and I see Mark truly appreciates what you have written for him.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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I know it isn't in the spirit of celebrating your birthday but I tried to write with the passion that flows through your own words honey...poets can't lie, can we?
My birthday wish for you is...happiness and serenity
Love Margaret
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Yep...
It's beautiful!
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