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Bad Date

Roses are red
Is that all they are?
The movie was lousy
Get out of my car!

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  • hisaddiction
    January 19
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    lmao...i love it!


  • just mercedes gold member
    January 4

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    this made me laugh.

    words of the rose
    are not in the hue
    some just find thorns
    so screw you too!


  • MagicLady silver member
    December 27, 2008

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    Oh my !!!! How about daisy's.......maybe a bit lower maintence than roses?

    A good giggle......don't you hate the dating life?

    Cheryl


  • Pollycheck
    December 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I must admit, I actually laughed at this one. Even though it is more than one line, it has the impact of a one liner.


  • ScreaminMime
    December 22, 2008

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    Roses are red
    Bad dates aren't new.

    I've had a few of those,
    I'm sure some have said that about me too.


  • Onomarith
    December 20, 2008
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    geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    what on earth was that????????


    • atomicmagoo
      December 20, 2008
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      Was in a Haiku sort of mood, and went in the opposite of the lovey-dovey poetry direction. Didn't mean to give you whiplash...

      • Onomarith
        December 21, 2008
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        well, you just did!

        but it was very creative and interesting
        you think fast, don't you?

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