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Will You Shed A Tear?

Will you shed a tear when I'm not here?
When I'm down And out?
When I'm rotten and no more?
When I can't get up?
When I'm crying to my last breath?
Will you shed a tear?
Please be honest...
What I have left?
What will I do?
Will you be here for me this morning, day and afternoon?
Even at night when I can't see straight or fight?
Will you be here or there to shed a tear?
My pain is strong, so my defense is stronger
I wanna hold on but there's nothing to hold here
Sometimes it's not fair for what I get here
The sadness, regret...the feeling that no one is there
So tonight as I sleep with the pills In my veins...
I ask you... Will you shed a tear for me anyway?...

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  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 20, 2008
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    powerful piece, very well done! the ending, in particular, was very strong.