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Don't Go!!!

Tonight we were so close together
Tomorrow you pack  your bags
Next week I see you run through the bushes & trees
Your knees are hurt ,I try to help but you run
I yell "DON'T GO!!"
But I know you don't want to come back
Don't go was all I wanted you to do
These were the only words to say
I chase you for a mile
I know you're lost
You are were you want to be now , Alone
I am hiding behind the tree

I come out of hiding to say

"Come Back with me please!'

Your harsh voice shot me with you words

"I wish to be alone,I know you'll come back"

A tear dropped down your face as you said 

"Leave now but come back tomorrow"

I left in fury and sadness

The next day I did come back to see her

But not just her there was a rope around her neck 

& a note that said I was afraid

Even though it was answered all I could say

was "Why did you run away?"

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  • kim5519
    December 20, 2008

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    um... um... such difficult questions! I don't know how it made me feel. It's a really sad but good.

    • 1998tiger
      April 3
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      I just relized this wasn't a really a good poem and i don't really care what you felt i just had to put something in the auther's notes