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Adams Apple

They said you'd bite,
That you'd sting me so hard.
While the pain you caused
Ricochets across my mind.

I guess they were right
But it doesn't help you anymore
Because they forgot to tell you...
I don't get mad, I get even.

I'll leave you wishing, praying
That you never met me,
That I wasn't the red apple
To your Adam, toxic only to you.

Stirring up a familiar dust,
Watching it sink into decaying flesh.
It's whip-lash striking deep,
Glorious in all it's pain.

So let me intrude upon your mind,
I'll turn the cogs of thought,
I'll snap the wires of hope,
And bleed you dry of sanity.

Don't pretend that you can't feel,
The fear caressing your body,
It's coursing through your veins,
My fear's your only distant memory.

So open your mind up wide,
Let the apples poison flow fast,
Let the death come slowly, painfully.
Let it trickle past, and come in waves.





Until you're nothing more than I was,



And all because of you.



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Woot, and this is just another random dark write, it doesn't actually resemble anything in my life currently. woot for that!

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    December 21, 2008
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    Oh so this is why you asked how to spell ricochet.
    And you call me vindictive.
    "Let the apples poison flow fast," -- should be "apple's".

    I LOVE the last two lines, great work darling. I love you muchly.

    I'm watching superbad, there's lots of drawings of penis's on the screen. Wanna see? Haha.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    this was beautifuly written darkliy
    you could feel your anger and pain through this
    witch makes me more glad that it isnt your true feelings