Roses are red upon the vine,
red ruby lips placed upon mine.
American beauty sweeter than wine,
this passionate flower, love so divine.
Skin soft as petals as lovers embrace,
heavenly touch in the tenderest place.
Nosgay of red roses standing in vase,
cannot compare to the beauty seen,
upon her face.
In a list
A contest entry
- Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroses by ScreaminMime.
1750 points, ended January 3, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Roses are red,
well done my friend.
Few have begun that way,
maybe you'll start a trend... -
You have written a truly beautiful poem. One that is filled with imagery that is delicate, magnificent and with the perfect touch of suggestiveness.
If I may, a couple of small corrections:
In the first verse, third line; a small typo, "then" I feel sure should be "than": Second verse, first line; I feel there should be a comma after "petals" as it makes the line flow easier and it is more gammatically correct.
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Thank you for the comment. It is appreciated Take care, Sandy
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Beautifully Sensual & Romantic!!
Wishing you all the best in the contest!! 
Peace & hugs, xx Cyn 
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Good Morning Cyn
Oh it is always nice to have you stop by. I hope all is well. Thank you for the lovely comment. It is always appreciated. You take care, Hugs and Smiles,
Blessings to you.
Sandy
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Poet master
A special little write of perfect rhyme and beauty. Well done as always.
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Good Morning Bob
It is always a pleasure to have you pop in and read my poems. I so appreciate your thought. Hope you are enjoying this rather snowy weekend. You take care and stay safe and warm.
Blessing to you,
Sandy
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What work we have here
The fingers and mind are in tune with beauty as they write...mac
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Good Morning Mac
What a lovely comment. Thank you for always being so encouraging. Blessing to my dear friend I hope you stay safe and warm this winter's day.
Peace and Grace,
Sandy
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