To make the pieces fit
won't guarantee forever,
eventually strain is felt,
edges start to fray.
Search the eyes to find the click
that's makes the future whole,
a fate where harmony reveals
a picture strong with passion.
Don't be content with that 'almost' piece,
it will fester and blister tomorrow.
Author notes
use one of these words to inspire a poem with
50 words or less. I chose 'jigsaw puzzle'
aubergine
jigsaw puzzle
starlight
bones
salt
teeth
peonies
hallway
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie! #2 by brandy..
400 points, ended January 11, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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aye, find the right piece and fit it in with a smooth gliding motion, all will be good then and the bigger picture will come into being. a good poem.
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Finding the pieces that fit is so symbolic. It fits the idea well, a powerful metaphor.
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great write mum
i feel like a jigsaw sometimes trying to put myself together lol
good luck in the contest
xxx ju xx
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Excellent
Great us of the word bank. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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