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Sam's Christmas Wish

 

 

Dear Santa Claus,

 

     I don't want much for Christmas this year.  No toys, games, or even a pet.  All I want is to see my parents just one last time and have them spend this Christmas with me.  I miss them very much and it's so difficult when everybody around me has their mom and dad always at there side.  I feel so empty and lost without them.  Sometimes I wish that I could close my eyes and wake up wherever they are today.  I know that the Lord has them safely at his side and that one day we will be reunited.  But, I'd give anything in the world just to have them home with me this Christmas.

 

     I can't even remember what it feels like to be held anymore.  It's a very uncomfortable feeling to be so young and not have any love around you everyday.  It's just as hard trying to find a friend here at this facility.  All of the other kids have been here longer than I have and know each other very well.  No one will give me an opportunity or even sit down and have a conversation with me.  They make me feel like I have some sort of disease and always alienate themselves from me.  I just wish that they could see what a bright and lovable kid I really am.

 

     Santa please send me a sign if you can hear me.  Let me know that I am not alone in this world.  I can't last another day in this orphanage especially, on Christmas day.  It would really mean the world to me if I could just have my family back for a day.  Just so that I can hold them in my arms again to let them know how much I love and miss them.  I also want to let them know that I never blamed them for me ending up here.  I know that I was angry in the beginning but, I am way past that already.  I will be eagerly waiting for your letter and hope that you receive this in time.  Thank you for all that you do and for giving me the opportunity to write you like I do every year.  Please make my Christmas wish come true this year.

 

 

Sincerely,

Sam

 

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  • LesbianOfLove
    November 15
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    This letter is very touching and completely relevant for this competition. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!


  • chelseacec
    November 8

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    so sad! i love the fact that i can relate without being in this position.
    good luck with the contest!


  • cazzy71
    November 8
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    thank you

    Thank you for entering,this fits the brief I gave and is well thought out.


  • poisonivystar4
    October 9
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    That's so sad! Good luck in the contest!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 19
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    Awwww this makes me feel so sad. I kind of want to cry now .


  • Symphony
    February 12
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    This was really sad to read - and yet so many children must go through this at christmas, with these thoughts of feeling and being alone, for what ever reason of their situation and circumstances -

    you brought sam alive to all of us, and i'm sure, tears to the eyes of many... heartbreaking tale... my own heart went out to him.

    thank you for entering, and for sharing this with us


  • ArtRocks27
    January 13

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    I love the twist to this poem. The title and background chosen show that it may be a happy poem but when you read it makes you want to cry and help this child be comforted any way possible. It was an extremely moving piece that makes you rather greatful for what you have in this world compared to someone who has nothing and no one. I want to thank you for sharing this poem with me and thank you for entering in my contest!

    Maggie

  • really poignant and emotional write here

    thanks for entering


  • Walk-Free
    December 31, 2008

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    A very heartening piece.

    you potrayed the lonliness of that boy well through his words.

    thanks and have a blessed new year


  • PastelMoons gold member
    December 31, 2008

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    Great narritive very emotionally effective
    you brought me to tears
    Thank you for sharing
    this amazing piece
    and best wishes in
    the contest

    ~Pastel


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    December 30, 2008

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    On a personal level there is a lot i could say... but i wont. Nice style to have written in.
    Thanks for entering.
    Laura


  • film noir
    December 29, 2008

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    This letter made my eyes water. I can just imagine a little kid writing and sending this letter. It's just not fair for any child to be put in this situation, but that's just how life rolls. Life gangsta like that.

    - Aly, the co-judge

    P.S. I lied. It really did make me cry.


  • nobodys-girl
    December 26, 2008
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    this really just made me want to cry...ah. Me and my friend help out at a place for kids with no family. not really an orphanage but similar. it breaks my heart to see all those kids who just want to be loved. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • dragonscales
    December 25, 2008

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    ohhhh that is so sad. it just makes me want to crrrrryyyyyyy!!!! i certainly hope that this poem is not true. that would be really sad if you were writing this from an orphanage.


  • Walk-Free
    December 24, 2008
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    a heartwarming write.

    thanks and Merry Christmas


  • redhanded
    December 23, 2008

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    awww such a great write, this sums up the xmas blues for a kid very well. thanks so much for your entry and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    Oh honey

    My heart goes out to you it truly does and if I could take you out of there I would in a heart beat . I know its hard to get started in a new place and get others to like you its that way in schools too and I dont know why for each child holds such wonderful blessings within . I am so sorry to hear about your parents and it seems you would have some relatives that could take you in and get you our of there . Have you written to any of them and told them whats happening . Often if they call the scnter wont tell them the truth and often wont tell you they called .So find a way to get word out to them somehow . God be with you honey and my prayers will sing to the highest to see you find a way to a loving home this christmas .

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    Very nicely done, your sentiment speaks tenfold.


  • SimplyNoodle
    December 22, 2008
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    i cried.....


  • daviscth silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    Congratulations on winning the golden cup with this amazing piece.


  • Rheea gold member
    December 21, 2008
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    I want Sam oh the children this is lovely and heartbreaking.

  • Judith Chandler
    December 21, 2008
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    I can only hope the child gets his wish.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • stella187
    December 21, 2008
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    You are very welcome. All the best for Christmas.

    Jenny


  • stella187
    December 21, 2008
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    Oh so sad, but very well written and beautiful.


  • Ademon
    December 21, 2008
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    Goosebumps

    .....it gave me goosebumps....


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 20, 2008

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    this was a good read my friend to be honest i loved it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    wow

    this poem has me in tears, as this is my first Christmas without mom in 54 yrs...you penned this so well and with sadness, thank you for this wonderful entry...good luck
    VOE


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    This is so great here hon I enjoyed this and you used the prompt so well!!!!! Good luck in the contest


  • Desire gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Oh My Word~

    Wow! Oy my Friend this letter tugs at the Heartstrings and when I saw the name my eyes swelled~
    Beautifully penned and the background compliments!! Gorgeous~
    Bravo!!
    Excellent~ How could Santa pass up this plea-
    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    wow J..

    this is beautifully sad..it really tugs at the heart strings. I hope the little guy's wish comes true! excellent work my friend.

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