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Let us dance in the sun ~ together

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Roses are red
and they offer themselves
in the language and rainbows of love ~

with perfumed grace
their silence shall sleep
on the kisses from angels above.

Intoxication overwhelms
as a blissful state of glee
dreamy images pure and sweet
occupy the space in me...

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  • DeGraw
    January 9

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    I could almost smell the rose! An absolutely beautiful poem, so sorry it didn't win!
    Regards,
    DeGraw


  • bluewho
    January 4
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    Thats beautiful!!! Nicely done!!


  • Malabu
    December 23, 2008
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    love the image presented in the first stanza and the lines follow add to the beauty

    mal


  • ScreaminMime
    December 21, 2008

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    Roses are red,
    and you added a pic.

    An extra point for you,
    let's see how many copy your trick.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 20, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments...

    Good luck in the contest!! peace, Cyn

  • mmook
    December 20, 2008
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    well done!

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