Your smooth skin entices
a hunger deep within me
My love, I beg of you just
let of me have one taste.
Your body fits in my hands
just perfectly, the moon
shining, the sweat glittering.
The eternal night that we face
is nothing compared to the passion
that we share.
What did you think?
Comments
-
This is very good! Some nice language and imagery. I really like the second stanza. Also some language that is suggestive but leaves something for the reader to fill in: a hunger within me . . .let me have one taste.
Adding your comment:
