One fine Saturday night sheltered went to play
They called the game jumping poles for adults
With a little too much down the gut with luck
Recommend by the bottle he carefully tucked;
Went to replace a naughty girl on a pole dance
Eagerly the crowed whistled lured by the sight
The lone girl looked awed to his coming plight
Pushed on the ramp he lost the bottle in flight;
What a sight he fumbled with the buttons tight
Holding on to the pole by his trembling knees
Winks flew as the girl jumped to help him strip
Souvenirs quickly tossed as bouncers moved in.
A memento strip went to each chosen customer
Lol how I envy them; disenchanted without one.
Author notes
Prompt:-
am basically selfish and egotistical so write me a poem
tear me down for all i care as long as it's all about me
hell, i've met one of my best friends because she tore a strip off me
thanks Luna much love.
Hope to get the memento now. What a joy that would be.
A contest entry
- dedicated to me by sheltered.
400 points, ended January 2, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [CONTEST] Seduce Me - Looking for an AP "Lover" by Miss Faerie.
700 points, ended February 15, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything!!! Pre-writes! Whatever! by MysteriousWhisper.
500 points, ended April 14, 87 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For my friends.. prewrites needed by Riftkin.
575 points, ended April 17, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed this poem of yours..
and want to wish you the best
with it in my contest.
As your words have proven to be
worthy of reading by me and all others.
Riftkin
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This actually made me laugh, the image that I conjured was very well done and made me laugh.
Great imagery.
Thank you kindly for entering my contest and good luck
Shari
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lol
this is almost a true story
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LOL....I am sure sheltered will enjoy this dedication
I like the block formation...Well Done!
Mariana
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Awesome take on the prompt.
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