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Stars Shine Like Tearstained Eyes

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Long after we met
Still standing in forever
Our kindred spirits released
Beyond our wildest desires

To find love alone together
For I found you there
In nights glow lights
Full of moon beams

Shed of inhibitions
With no one to see
I kissed you secretly
Under the naked tree

Webbed in shadows
Embraced yet still free
For I found you there
In the warmth of the eve

Without a summer breeze
To be dancing in the droplets
Of Nectar sweet as a honey bee
Subtle light and free

To fly with you in dreams
Relished natures fantasy
Will blush my heart
When our lips touch

For I found you there
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Author notes

:: Titles ::
6. I'm [Broken] Again ::What a Surprise::
7. I'm In Love With Loving You
8. & Stars Shine Like Tearstained Eyes
9. Aromatic Amnesia
10. Forever & Ever [Say My Name]   

I picked # 8 Stars Shine Like Tearstained Eyes                                                   

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 30, 2008

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    awww this is beautiful, it makes me want to meet someone as wonderful, though of course I already have a great guy!


  • LoveSpell-PurpleRose silver member
    December 24, 2008

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    Wonderful !

    Well expressed, Good flow and if I must say you are creating some wonderful poetry here lately ! Keep them coming. Good Luck In The contest ! Brenda Gae