A state purely indescribable,
Oerwhelming bliss, it's never ending.
Never thought I could feel like this,
Happiness and love taking over me.
In your arms I feel the safest,
I know that I am finally safe.
Your strong arms protecting me,
Your lips locked upon mine.
My skin trembling at your touch,
My body longing for your passion.
Can't stand being away from you,
Missing you, whishing I was in your arms.
You are my one and only,
The one I need, the one I crave.
Your mesmerizing eyes looking through me,
Knowing what I feel without speaking.
You complete me, allow me to be whole,
You make me feel confident and beautiful.
Loving the way you can't keep your hand away,
Maybe it's because im irresistible.
Loving you with my all,
I never want to stop loving you.
You are everything I need and more,
I love you bunches, bunches, bunches baby!
Author notes
Just a poem i wrote at work today about my baby lol
Please tell me what you think
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A very lovely write. I think, more than the poem itself, your author notes speak louder because, there you state that, even when you were away, when your mind should have been on something else entirely... you were thinking of the one you love.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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Awesome job. Keep up the great work and keep writing great pieces like this one!!! You have enough talent for probably all of us here at Allpoetry! Truly a great write. Such an astoudning and amazing job. If you feel like it, check out my poems and feel free to comment them! Be honest, please! Thanks so much for sharing this piece with all of us here at Allpoetry!
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its incredible how the affair sof our heart can love someone so powerfully that it influences us to share that love we have for themwith others. its amazing your latest write here Chrissy how powerful it is. your wording rings tue and I cna only dream of feeling such love again someday. any ways just truly a spectactular write thats really beautiful and very deep too. any ways keep on writing and he is a very lucky guy to have you
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This is the sweetest poem! It made me laugh... not in a bad way, I mean, I was just so happy reading it that I laughed. Thanks for making my day a little brighter.
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