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One Lily


In a valley of many colors
One lily stood high
Above all the rest
Alone in its uniqueness
Splendid in its beauty
Glorious in its determination
To weather the storm




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LIONHEART
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  • Lilredlll
    December 23, 2008

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    SIMPLE BUT NICE

    I CAN PICTURE THIS LONE LILY IN A FIELD OF WILD FLOWERS. IN ITS BEAUTY IT WILL WEATHER THE STORM. LUV THIS !
    LINDA