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Whitewashed

Missing image

Nothing will ever match

the whiteness of this mask;

 

this mask which frowns at the world

from within, without apology.

 

Sparks of recognition send signals

to other masks stained white,

 

as they form a vast ocean of whitecaps

bobbing in golden rays of sunshine.

 

Manicured, bejeweled hands steer a bright future,

blocking from their vision eddies of muted colors;

 

impoverished souls struggling along, clinging

to life on their makeshift rafts, while untold

 

injustice rules from behind the white masks,

camouflaged as justice, whitewashed.

 

 

 

 

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  • Ken-Maverick
    December 22, 2008

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    *Sighs*
    This one touched me personally in a way...
    Your thoughts are deep with this poem Cyn
    Well done

    All the best to you, always

    Ken