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Classic Suicide

Surrounded by his loved ones
there voices speaking slow
He remembers all his dreams
all the places he wanted to go

All thats done and gone
Hes planning the classic suicide
Hes tired of this life
and running out of places to hide

He tells them all goodbye
In his own little way
He says prayers for them all
And knows he'll see them one day

He's off to his bedroom
To carry out his plan
He lifts up the rope
And steps on top of the can

His door slowly creeps open
Followed by his little sisters eyes
She doesn't know whats happening
Shes trying to understand all the buts and whys

He steps of the can
And she is left all alone
She stares at his body
Smells the air of his cologne

The little girl is all grown up
And she still is wondering why
Why did Trenton do that?
Why did he want to die?

Her life is sinking in
Nothing seems to be right
Shes sitting on her bed
Wondering is she should die to night

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