Falling through the doorway
with blood dripping like water
from veins and arteries
slit open wide
And as I hold you in my arm's
waiting for help to come
you look up at me
and for once I don't see fear
just love and peace
So many night's of tears
falling unbidden again
resting now in my arm's gently
I never realized you were this small
And as eyes flutter closed
I scream out in pain
out into the dark of life's night
and it echoes and echoes
until silence comes as dawn
So cold and lifeless
but I will not let you go
so stunned my eyes open wide
still whispering over again
that this will be ok
And help never comes
for this body beside mine
and I realize
that this is all you are now
Gasping for air
still trying to wake you
with your blood mingling
slowly with my own now
desperately shaken
I cry and bleed my life onto the ground
thinking this isn't right
this isn't right
this just isn't right
You didn't wait for me
We were supposed to die together....
Author notes
not about me no so dont get worried here this came out of nowhere i han't cut in about 15 months wow that's a while...kinda miss it though at times
A contest entry
- & sometimes the prettiness never dies♥ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Painful Side of Life. by November-Dani.
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Comments
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I know how you feel about missing it.
This is a beautiful heartfelt write. I love it.
So well done.
Dani. -
This breaks my heart, as it reminds me of someone I used to know, who tore themselves apart slowly.
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I know the feeling of the poem and your notes, so i can only say keep it flowing my friend and know that you don't need it.
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i likey
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