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Little Bundles All

Love blew you up like a party balloon.

Your mother’s cries, champagne-pop birth

and straightway

celebrations from all, bawling from you.

 

Over three decades, the party pulls around to

your own Little Bundle’s presence.

Living’s a privilege. Parties, icing on its cake.

Author notes

Prompt: Image of an opened box of party paraphernalia.
Any style acceptable.
Given Theme: Celebration.
Length: 15 to 50 words. [No. of words above = 42]

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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    December 29, 2008

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    Although this contest is anonymous, this poem must be from someone who knows me. This was an especially wonderful birthday since I was able to share it with my own Little Bundle. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz


    • Lyndon gold member
      December 30, 2008
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      Thank you for the Bronze.

      I am glad you had a wonderful birthday; a family birthday.
      Enjoy! Ron.