chills crawl up my spine, i think;hide, no..disappear...
shake it all off, and not tell a soul where i go,
why tell;if in the end there is no matter to it.
so where;a box;a bag;a room;no...my mind...
lost in it for a while;FOREVER,
tell me is that what you were thinking.
i can only try to imagine what you went through,
but all you do know is hide,
you hide in there from them, me, yourself...
where did you go?
the only place that you can go so deep into, is your mind...
your caught;no trapped; your entangled in there,
and i can tell there is no way out, your body says it all.
what hurts more than you lost in there,
is that you couldn't tell me all your worriment
i went along and did everything and thought you;me;good
i can only try to tell myself that i wasn't the problem,
but i cant, seeing you dissolving before my eyes...
i just tell myself that i tried...i cry, and ask,
where did you go?
hold your hand;lost forever;me;you;FOREVER
Author notes
i have actually heard that song before, it is very good...
my poem, actually, has alot of punctuation...and if it is bothersome, please say so but to me it has more of a more exaggeration to it... please comment
A contest entry
- Love and Loss by LilEmoPrincess.
550 points, ended December 23, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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emotionally intense as tears are shed - best wishes and many blessings always xxx
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Awesome write. I love this piece; poem. Inspiring and musing. I can really feel you;me;forever.
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