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sweet dreams

you chase dreams
nothing is ever what it seems
i chase dreams too
you dream of me and you
i dream of happiness and a new start
a place to mend a broken heart
our dreams so different yet the same
we used to want the same it just never came
now i start over chasing that thought
i cry too, a lot
you think you see it, that you understand
your vision needs to expand
its not all it seems
but these just are...sweet dreams

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  • Circa1987
    December 20, 2008
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    i wanna be the smile you put on your face